@03:27Great short. Not as creepy as the terrible old man, but definitely more polished and executed. The editing is fantastic and professionally done, as well as the angles of shots you used, like seeing Carter's hand and smoke rising from his head after being electrocuted. I tip my hat to you sir. Just one question. I watched both this one and the one on youtube and I can't seem to find the missing line. What is it?
@03:06While I understand the need for the rush and immediacy of suspense, the lines here and just before were a little hard to make out against the background noises.
"The Statement of Randolph Carter" based on the short story by H.P. Lovecraft
DISCLAIMER: FOR SOME BIZARRE REASON DEVIANTART CUTS OUT THE MOST IMPORTANT LINE IN THE FILM AT THE VERY END. I'VE TRIED UPLOADING SEVERAL TIMES WITH THE SAME RESULT. IF YOU WISH TO WATCH THE FILM WITHOUT DA MESSING IT UP, CHECK IT OUT ON YOUTUBE: [link]
Animation- Doug Simon, Becky Bettencourt, Kate McElroy Backgrounds- Doug Simon, Kate McElroy Character Design- Becky Bettencourt Preproduction- Doug Simon, Becky Bettencourt Voices- James Soper Sound Design- Brian Engh ([link]) Music: Eric Wang
I'm not sure what "punchline" everyone is talking about. I've seen the dA version and the Youtube version, and they both sound exactly the same, creepy voice and all.